Frustration, Desperation, Annoyance
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- 800 Miles of Fun
A happy trip instead of hate, sadness, and pain! - I am weak, You are strong
Another one of my pieces that speaks of pain as well as other emotions!
Boiling rage surfaces,
Past feelings renewed
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
Words bandied about
Meaning more than they seem
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
Naïve blame reflected
Sarcasm used effectively
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
Fake love floats around
Still the feeling is clear
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
Life goes forward
We all have a life
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
Still we smile
Still we laugh through
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
Almost to the end
Just a little longer
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
Till death do you part
And forevermore
Frustration, desperation, annoyance
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What a great poem! You have a great way with words. Here's hoping you are feeling better.
This poem is fantastic! Up - beautiful, awesome, interesting - Great work!
Sunshine: Thank you :-) I think it only came out the way it did because I was in one of those moods where I just needed to get my frustration out on paper. I always seem to find it comes out a bit better when i am super passionate, even if not in a good way, while I am writing. Thanks again!!
Homesteadbound: Thank you! I hope I feel better soon as well, but it might be a bit. Still I see the light at the end of the tunnel and then I will be MUCH MUCH MUCH better :-) Thank you for your well wishes :-)
Krazlkat: Thank you so much! Thank you for stopping by, leaving a comment and voting up! I really appreciate that :-)
I feel this way some days and you've described the feelings perfectly through your poem. Excellent poem! I bet it feels good to get it all out and be creative at the same time. Up all the way except funny of course.
This is fabulous.. I love the part on "fake love." Your pictures are beautiful. Well done, sadly relevant. Voted up, tweeted, dugg!
Ah yes... I am way to familiar with these types of feelings... yet you wove them beautifully together. Glad you took some time to play around on hub... hopefully they helped get those feelings under control! :)
Thanks Just Ask Susan :-) It did feel good, and then something else happened and put me right back there! Still I always love the power that strong emotions can give you as well. Thanks again :-)
Thank you so much Tammyswallow!! I wanted pictures that were touching and yet beautiful as well! Thank you for the tweet!! I really appreciate you taking the time to help me out a bit :-) Thank you!
Well hello barbergirl :-) You of all people should probably know what this is about! If not... that is okay because you are LUCKY that you live in California :-) I also am glad that I took the time to write it. I wasn't sure if I wanted to publish it or not, but I felt the desperate need to share! Now I am quite happy that I did take the time to do so! Thank you again :-)
Wow Myth! I think we have all felt this way but you did a great job expressing it. I hooe everything is smoothing out and as usual you've used a great coping mechanism in working those feelings out....don't you feel bett right after a good write? Hm? Sure ya do! Lol
Keep up the great work!
Thanks RHW! I will feel a lot better after Saturday! lol. It did help writing it out! I'm actually really proud of this one, for some reason my painful writing always seems to come out better then my happy ones! Thanks for stopping by!
YES, yes... I have a pretty good feeling where this is stemming from and frankly, it kind of makes me happy that I am not around :) Sorry to sucker my way out of it! LOL But I think it is actually surrounded by two separate emotions that your feeling. Based off the situation you are dealing with and your very own situation as well. I saw that right away! :) But it is good to get it off your chest and even if it doesn't directly make you feel better... you know at least that it was a good release! :)
It was a good release. I just wish it allowed all of my stress to go away :-( lol. And I know you are happy u don't have to deal with all the stuff I've been dealing with! I blew up at Cassie the other day because of it. Oh well... Almost over. At least that is what I keep telling myself. I can't believe in less then a month I will get to see you guys!!! So Excited for that!!!
Mysticalstorm, Glad to have the opportunity to meet your poetic streak, the far deeper meaning of your message is quite clear. Cred2
Thanks Cred2... With how busy I've been it seems as if the only thing that I have time to write now days is the stuff that really hits home with the way I'm feeling. Now that this event has passed it is a great feeling of relief!! Thanks for stopping by... as always I appreciate it!
This is a very strong poem and I just had to read it again to refresh my memory. Well done!
I really enjoyed this poem it's really hard when you work so hard at love and you so often feel "Frustration, desperation, and annoyance" moved me voted up!!
We all experience these, at some point of time. Life carries on.
Excellent.
All the way up.
Barbergirl: Thank you. I still enjoy this one, but it brings back those feelings... hard to believe they were over 2 months ago already!!
AliceFSpencer: Thank you! It is funny because at the time I felt like it was so difficult to continue dealing with it everyday, but now looking back I wonder why i was so bothered by it all!
Rajan jolly: Thank you. It is very true that life carries on, at the time it sometimes seems as if it is the end of the world and yet it never is as bad as we feel! Thanks for stopping by!
Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago
Amazingly outstanding!! What a way with words you have!! You got my vote:)